tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8340775482704928254.post3964479163678201920..comments2023-11-03T05:40:23.880-05:00Comments on Feeling Red: No One Likes Travelingkingsmartarsehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11117413341899042587noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8340775482704928254.post-8035216954032817122007-12-18T16:26:00.000-06:002007-12-18T16:26:00.000-06:00i wish i knew how to line edit.good so far.can i c...i wish i knew how to line edit.<BR/>good so far.<BR/>can i critique? well, i will anyway. <BR/>i feel like you need more omnipotent thought. otherwise, interesting quasi-hook (you know how i like my boy meets girl).Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8340775482704928254.post-65578283786606179502007-12-10T21:15:00.000-06:002007-12-10T21:15:00.000-06:00so where's the rest of it?so where's the rest of it?Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com